Monday 22 May 2017

Lolly House by Simon

Lolly House

Two children were going on a walk and they came across a lolly house. It was made out of gingerbread. It was as big as the world's largest elephant. The icing was as white as snow, the roof was full of red lollipops. The red lollipops were reflecting off the river nearby. The jellybeans looked like windows. Inside when you turned on the tap, maple syrup came out, it was incredible. The doorknob was made out of white chocolate rasins. 

Crunch, the two children Bob and Jo stepped on the cracker path. Crunch, crunch, crunch Bob and Jo ate the house. Inside they found an evil wizard. 

By Simon

1 comment:

  1. Wow Simon. That is a great story. I felt hungry reading it. I would love to know what happens to Bob and Jo when they meet the evil wizard. Maybe that could be your next chapter.

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